There was a man named Frank. He loved nothing more than his horses. He rode his horses everywhere. Frank was the only person that owned a horse in town. There was one time where he went to the store, and they let him take his horse in. Sadly, the store got burnt to the ground do to a robbery. There was a horse track at the scene and horse hair on the side walk. The police thought of who it could be but they just couldn't think. Frank saw the fire in the news paper and knew what he had to do. He got rid of his horses, took his fence down, and got a bike. He did that in the span of 2 days. As the police thought about it, they went to his house knowing it was him that burnt down the store. When the police showed up, they all they saw was a bike. They didn't even question him but walked off and went to look for people that owned horses, and they never found out who did it in the END!
Marissa,
ReplyDeleteYou have a very detailed story. That is what I've been trying to get my fourth graders to do with the emoji story starter. I might show yours as an example to help motivate them.
I love a mystery! I think Frank was very lucky to never get caught. I'm wondering what store would let him take his horse in. Do you think Petsmart would? Heep up the good work! Happy blogging.
Mrs. Bentley from Georgia, USA
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Thank you! I hope that they learn from me! I don't think Pet Smart would because horses are really big!
DeleteGood job, Marissa
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